雅思口语真题原创范文：一处曾去过的拥挤场所分享！

　　【原创范例】

　　Among all the crowded places I’ve been to, the place that impressed me most must be the subway station Xierqi line 13 in Beijing. Actually, line 13 is one of the alternative routes for me to get to my workplace from home. I remember it was about 8 o’clock in the morning couple weeks ago. When I stepped into the station by myself, I was completely astonished by the density and massive crowds in there. The queues were like endless long with people pushing and squeezing each other in order to hop on the train. Despite the fact that I managed to squeeze myself into the train successfully, it was totally an unpleasant and stifling experience because there was barely any space for me to breathe. I was like a ham in the middle of the sandwich, being surrounded by the numerous passengers in a cramped space. The entire journey lasted only about 15 minutes long, but I felt like an hour to spend and wished it could end as soon as possible. What’s more, it was also extremely challenging for me to push myself out of the crowds, as people had jammed the door even when the train stopped by the platform. What I really want to suggest is that the government should put some effort into reducing the passenger flow. If no action is taken, there might be some potential accidents that could lead to severe consequences.

图片来源于网络

　　词汇

　　impress sb 使某人印象深刻

　　alternative route 可选择的线路

　　be astonished by 被…震惊

　　massive crowds 大批人群

　　endlessly long queues 看不到尽头的长队

　　pushing and squeezing each other 互相推挤

　　hop on the train 跳上车

　　an unpleasant and stifling experience 一次不适且令人窒息的经历

　　be barely any space for sb 几乎没有某人的空间

　　surrounded by 被…环绕

　　a cramped space 一处拥挤的空间

　　it’s extremely challenging for sb to do sth 做某事对某人来说极度困难

　　jam the door 堵在门口

　　stop by the platform 停靠在车站

　　put some effort into 努力

　　reduce the passenger flow 减少客流

　　potential accidents 潜在事故

　　severe consequences 严重后果

　　语法答题的时候根据提示把地点题的要素描述清楚，合理运用从句，加入事件以涉及不同时态的答案分数会更高。