雅思写作核心语法雷区“双谓语错句义务教育话题”

　　中国学生的雅思写作成绩是听、说、读、写四项里最低的，写作单项成绩是全世界排名倒数第四，考好点儿是全世界倒数第五。主要原有两个:其一，语法功底较差;其二，汉式思维导数多错句。

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　　双谓语错句：义务教育话题

　　错误范例1

　　Imposing the policy on the public should be an effective measure to save the children in rural areas are compelled to withdraw from school for the tuition fees

　　解析：

　　①双谓语错句，一句话当中同时出现了“ "should be”和“ are compelled to withdraw”两个谓语

　　②改正方法:把划线部分变成定语从向即可。

　　Imposing the policy on the public should be an effective measure to save the children in rural areas who are compelled to withdraw from school for the tuition fees

　　对大众实施这个政策应当是一个有效措施，该政策能拯救那些因为学费而被迫辍学的农村孩子。

　　错误范例2

　　To avoid traping in the vicious circle, the first measure should be taken is that the government should ensure all children between the age of 5and 15 years attend school to acquire academic knowledge.

　　解析：

　　①拼写错误，“trap+ing/-ed要双写“p"，如果对拼写拿不准的话一定要查字典。

　　②语态错误，句意是“为了避免陷入到恶性循环中”，应为被动语态，所以改为 ”being trapped”

　　③双谓语错句，改正方法:把“ should be taken”变成定语从句或者用动词不定式作定语也可。

　　To avoid being trapped in the vicious circle, the first measurethat should be taken/to be taken is that the government should ensure all children between the age of 5 and 15 years to attend school to acquire academic knowledge.

　　为了免陷入到恶性循环中，政府应当采取的第一项措施是确保所有5岁到15岁的孩子都能上学，获取知识。