雅思7分范文及解析：平均工作时长更长的国家经济发展更成功

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　　Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　题目来源：2020年7月11日亚太雅思大作文

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　　I would argue in this essay that there is no clear correlation between the average working time of a country and the economic success level of it.

　　The economic standard of nations and their working hours of labor forces are not proportional at all; the complicated reasons lying behind the working time and the multiple factors leading to economic development compel the claim to be ridiculous. To objectively verify whether an element contributes to an outcome, one should first find out the internal system of the causality; in some cases, longer working time in a country solely reflects the fact that its labor forces may not be as developed as that in other countries. In other words, they may have to increase the working hours of laborers because they are not as efficient as places that are, say, technologically prosperous in terms of productivity. Such a situation explains why time length cannot be a measurement in judging economic success: sometimes countries with longer average working time are the counterexample of more economically successful ones.

　　Before assessing whether or not countries can be compared in terms of their economic success, we must provide credible standards that can successfully do this job. However, there are no even plausible measurements involved in finding out the answer. What is the quantifying parameter we consider to measure the success of a country in terms of economy, or should I say, what is the true meaning of "economic success"? Should we measure the total GDP or per-capital GDP of a nation? Or can we compare the CPI or the import-export volume? Results may vary with different criteria, and even if there are confirmed statistics, the conclusion may still be biased because they cannot persuasively reflect whether they are “economically successful” or not. The GDP of the entire country may be high because of a large population, and a higher per-capital GDP may hide the wealth disparity inside; other measurements may still have problems like this. Though some countries have significant gaps in terms of economic prosperity, there are lots of difficulties out there when we attempt to compare countries that are close in their economic development.

　　In conclusion, it is simple-minded to add working time into consideration of whether countries are more economically successful or not; the economy of nations is also hard to be compared because of no persuasive standards. 

　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　Correlation 关联

　　Proportional 成正比的

　　Compel 迫使

　　Prosperous 繁荣的

　　Quantify 量化

　　Verify 查验

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