雅思写作6.5分示例范文——教育类

　　雅思写作6.5分示例范文——教育类  很多烤鸭的目标分是6.5分，那么雅思6.5分的作文是怎样的呢？本文为大家分享一篇关于教育的6.5分雅思写作示例，一起来看看，并给出考官点评！

　　题目：Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to uneversities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.

　　Do you agree or disagree?

　　全文：

　　I agree with people who say that too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills, in all levels of educations.

　　Since I was child, I've been studying in different sorts of institution(s) and I could realize - mainly when I started to work - that most of the time we spend more time in 'what' or 'why' do something than 'how' do it.

　　For sure I believe it's important to know the theory through what 'things works'. This knowledge encourage the reflection, the research, and so on...

　　That's why the education standard is : in one side there is a teacher explaining the subject and in another side there are the students trying to learn everything.

　　Usually, there are few practical classes, when we can really develop our skills, for example: laboratory classes and computer classes.

　　Even in my university course - Industrial Engineering- there are few practical tasks. That's why Ithink the structure of education could be more balanced in terms of theory and practical skills. I(n) this way people would be more capable to cope with personal and professional problems.

　　I believe that some institutions have already realized the importance of this balanced education. Some evidences to prove it: the increasing number of study cases and tasks which involve real problems like solving a marketing problem in a real company. Other evidence is that increasing number of MBAs offered around the world.

　　Therefore, I agree that we need to promote  more the practial skills , but, as I see it, this change has been occuring.

　　考官评价：回应了写作任务的各部分要求，全文立场清晰。对提出的观点进行了拓展和支持，行文连贯流畅。有效地使用了连接词，但分段不够好，很多段落只有1句话。词汇丰富、灵活、准确，使用了词伙，如reflection，research，balanced in terms of theory and...，personal and professional problems。采用了多种复杂结构，句子无误。语法和标点无误。

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