雅思写作常考话题高分范文分享:Is appearance important?
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雅思写作常考话题高分范文分享:Is appearance important?外表是否重要?针对这类题目,应该如何作答呢?这里和上名校小编一起来看看高分范文吧,希望对大家的雅思备考能够给出帮助!
文章结构
第一段:引出话题+文章概述
第二段:为什么一些人想改变外貌。
第三段:整容对个人的好处。
第四段:整容对个人的坏处。Furthermore, 对社会的坏处。
第五段:To conclude.
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In the past millenniums, beauty is an ever-lasting topic. Many people have spent a fortune on cosmetic surgery, while more are planning to. What has coincided with this development is the increasing controversy of changing one’s appearance, and this article will analyze the pros and cons below.
People change their look for different reasons. Some of them may suffer from injuries, like scratching or burning, and cosmetic surgeries help them to get back the confidence that they used to have. Moreover, many people choose cosmetic surgery simply because they are not satisfied with some of their facial characteristics, such as a birthmark on the face.
It cannot be denied that when one person looks different, he/she may need to face a lot of malicious mocking or discrimination in their daily life. Many of them do not have a strong heart, which is not a mistake, and cosmetic surgeries can help them to dodge a lot of meaningless, unnecessary and unexpected insults. Furthermore, it is not a secret that when one person looks more attractive, he/she can have a better chance to be employed, such as being an actor or a model. If one person can afford the price and risk, it is completely their freedom to choose whatever way they look.
However, some of the risks cannot be ignored. Cosmetic surgery is still a new medical business, compared with other medical fields. It is not a surprise to see that some of the doctors or nurses are not professionally trained, because different countries have different standards to supervise this new-born industry. In the long run, if it is not strictly regulated, I do believe that this trend will become harmful to the society, because some of the potential danger is not difficult to be foreseen. People may suffer from the side effects, like infections, and they need to visit the hospitals regularly in order to maintain the surgical results. More frighteningly, people may change their look for immoral reasons. Because the idea to connect “identity” with facial features has long been implanted in people’s mind, it is possible to cause chaos in the society. It is possible for criminals, such as serial killers, to have such “cosmetic” surgeries to swap their faces with other people, so that they can have the alibi in court.
To conclude, people can change the way they look as long as they wish, but it needs to be under strict supervisions, or else it might be harmful to the society in the future.
以上内容由西蒙弗雷泽大学教育学硕士,英语专业8级,环球教育•华南总校人气雅思写作Johnson老师原创。
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