2022年3月2日雅思大作文解析

三月春光匆匆，已经过去一周了，大家的雅思准备得如何呀？快来看看3月得第一场考试——3月2日的雅思大作文回顾吧！

首先来看3月2日的雅思大作文回顾&分析 3月2日 雅思大作文题

个人数据安全：

越来越多人在网上存储个人信息(网购, 网银, 社交)Positive or negative?

题目解析： 总体认为个人信息存在网上是一种负向的发展

主体段1: 这样做确实可能带来便利

分论点1: 网购网银方面的便利就是节省了时间, 不用重复输入这些信息

分论点2: 社交方面, 披露了个人信息, 方便找人和被找

主体段2: 个人信息被盗会导致被骗钱

主体段3：个人信息被盗本身就是隐私受到侵害

想要在雅思考试大作文上拿高分，不仅要结构清晰，论证有力，高级、地道、专业的表达也非常重要。

不同的话题涉及到的专业术语大相径庭，只有准确地表达你的观点，举出恰当而又说服力的例子才能让文章脱颖而出。 让我们来看看这次我们能学到哪些与这次话题相关的高分词组和短语吧！
3月2日高分词组短语

Defining benefit 明显好处

Delivery and billing address收货和账单地址

Targeted groups of people 目标人群

Date theft 数据窃取

Grim threat 严峻威胁

Financial loss 财物损失

Layers of firewalls 层层防火墙

Sensitive, private information 敏感的个人信息

Core elements 核心成分

Custom officer 海关人员

Distribution of loss and gain 损益分布

如果你能够掌握以上表达，那么你在这个话题上已经成功了一半，而剩下的另一半则取决于语法的准确性及多样性。

用正确的语法不扣分，用更复杂的句式来高效有力地表达观点能大幅加分！

在这里给大家分享了独家范文中涉及到的9大高分语法句型，大家快学起来，灵活运用起来！

3月2日高分句子语法

1.Once personal information, such as delivery and billing address and credit card number, is stored in the system, there is no need to type in this kind of information repeatedly whenever a new order is placed or a wire transfer is initiated. 时间状语

2.For example, creating such personal labels as hobbies helps users to find other like-minded people. 非谓语动词

3.I myself, a frantic collector of fashion shoes, joined the Canadian Sneaker Community on Facebook, making new friends who share the same love of sneakers. 结果状语

4.However, this development is not an unalloyed good as it midwifed a surge in data theft, which has incurred two main losses. 原因状语, 非限定定语从句

5.First, those who trust the existing online data protection mechanism face grim threat of financial loss. 限定性定语从句

6.As long as they are determined, Black Hats, as hackers with malicious intents are called, can usually manage to bypass layers of firewalls installed by computer experts and steal sensitive, private information stored in online accounts. 条件状语, 分词作定语

7.Afterwards, they either sell this information to a third party, which is less profitable but less troublesome, or use this information to extract every last penny from the victim, which requires more skills but brings more handsome returns. 非限定定语从句

8.This is because leakage of this kind of information would make them feel exposed to the strange, outside world,  where they have inadequate protection. 非限定定语从句

9.No sooner had he demanded 200 dollars from me to clear an international parcel, which was actually non-existent, that I realized that he was a con and my personal information and privacy were lost. 倒装 吃透Shelby大神的这篇作文精华分享，雅思写作提分水到渠成~

碍于篇幅原因今天的雅思大作文就先解析到这里啦～